Good to see mind maps etc uploaded - but you need to catch up with the representation blog, as well as uploading storyboards etc.
The mind map is a little vague, I would like to have seen more than one drilling deeper into your idea.
I would also like to see a much more detailed outline of the story for your film. You should discuss characters, the audience likely response to them and the plot twists.
At the moment these posts are at a level 2.
I've finished the representation thing. I need to get the storyboard, recce, script and pitch stuff from katie and david next lesson and I'll finish it on the night I get them hopefully. I can't really change the mind map but I have added to the story about the characters and stuff.
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