Feedback - Miss Spencer

Audience research feedback - Although you have clearly researched your subject you need much more detail in this post. At the moment this is a level 2 - in order to improve you should:
Use the graphs/statistics you found within your blog, and ensure you say where you got these from (credit your source)
Think about the audience reception theories - we will be covering these in lesson next week. You must discuss these within an audience post


Genre research feedback
Your genre research is much more detailed, and you clearly understand the genre as it is today. At the moment you are nearly in a level 3, in order to improve you should add some history of the development of the genre research. This will help you understand how the genre has developed and decide if you want to use conventions from different eras of the genre.